Sunday, November 25, 2007

Chapter 3 by demand!!!!

Chapter 3: Hunted

We started to walk out of the woods. Tooboe was weak and could barley walk. Then a familiar smell hit my nose “Water!” I said. Akuji and Soshaku stopped and looked at me
“So?” Akuji said
I scowled at him “So!? You dudes are stupid!”
“I know!” Tooboe said happily “We can drown the hunters!”
I glared at him “Like I said stupid!”
I sighed and started to move towards the direction of the water. Ok so you are probably thinking ‘she is getting a drink!’ Nice try but no! I finally saw the water. It twinkled in the moonlight. It was the Atlantic ocean.
I grinned “We can catch a boat out of here and we will be safe for a while.” I said
Tooboe smiled and Akuji rolled his eyes at me.
“Hey I don’t see you guys coming up with any good plans!” I snapped.
Akuji snarled but Soshaku didn’t seem to care. I wondered if they would let a bunch of blood stained, cut up, teens onto a boat?! Let alone a couple of wolves! I cussed to myself, how are we going to get on? I thought. I noticed that Tooboe was looking at me,
“What?” I asked
“I can get us on the boat.” He said
We all stopped and stared at him. He grinned happily.
“Follow me!” He said
He stopped leaning on me and started to wobble over to a small shop near the pier. We followed him and inside there we a lot of collectable animal toys and statues.
He ran over to a section with dog collars and chains. He turned to us and smiled.
“Oh no!” Akuji growled.
“Oh yes!” I snapped. I grabbed him by the shirt and threw a spiked collar over his neck.
He choked a bit and I looked at Soshaku. He put a flame collar around his neck.
Tooboe handed me a chain collar. It glittered like the ocean and it had a tag on it that read ‘Alpha’.
“Why does SHE get that one?” Akuji snorted.
“Because she is the alpha,” Tooboe snapped “Now shut up!”
Akuji growled at him and shut his mouth. I put the chain around my neck and Tooboe put a studded collar around his neck. I motioned my pack to walk silently out the door. They nodded and followed me. The shopkeeper was looking at a portrait of a cat playing with a string, the shopkeeper was big, she looked as though she had a double chin and she had a giant mole on her cheek. We were just about to get out of the door when we heard a loud high pitched bark. I looked at the lady but she didn’t budge. There was a tiny wiener dog with a large collar that read ‘duck’.
“Shut up!” Soshaku hissed.
The dog barked louder. Soshaku morphed and made an attempt to bite the dog.
“Don’t! That will make it yip that’s worse!” I hissed under my breath.
Soshaku growled at it unsatisfied by the little dog.
“What is it duck?” The lady looked up from her picture.
“I hope you kids are plannin’ on payin’ that.”
She had an accent from Ireland and her squinty eyes shone.
“Uhh....we are just…” I started to say but Akuji interrupted “admiring how well your collars work on our …dog?” He said looking at Soshaku who was still a wolf
“Oh ok please don’t hurt duck then.” She said
She pulled out a magazine and started to read. The dog started to bark even harder when Soshaku turned back into a human.
“Shut up!” He growled,
and smashed his fist against the dogs head. The dog yipped and the lady looked up. The dog was now bleeding.
“DUCK!!!” She yelled
“Run!” I yelled. We got up and started to run.
“Get back here thief!” She yelled
We ran as fast as we could. “Morph!” I yelled
We all changed. I looked back and the woman looked as if she just saw aliens. I cussed at myself. I heard sirens coming closer. “We need to get on that boat!” I growled.
Akuji nodded and started to run back. He ran full speed at the lady. She was now holding a phone saying “Yeah, I saw them! Wolves yeah!” Then Akuji came at her. She screamed as he jumped on her. She fell and was flopping around and screaming.
“Let’s go!” I yelled and we all turned around and started to run back.
“I’m not going to hurt you lady!” Akuji kept yelling at her.
But she kept screaming “Shut up!” He hissed.
“Akuji don’t kill her!” I growled coming up to him.
But it was too late he bit her in the neck. “Why the f—“ I was cut off, “Hurry the boat!”, Tooboe said. We looked over and the boat was leaving. Soshaku turned human and grabbed Akuji by the neck and we started to run after the boat. “Ouch let go!” He growled.
“Why did we need the collars again?!” Akuji complained
“Well if someone didn’t kill the lady we would have gotten on the boat without having to stow away!”
“Whatever! Now let me go!” Akuji grumbled
“Ok!” Soshaku said
We ran up to the pier and Soshaku threw Akuji and he flew onto the boat. Then we heard a thud then Akuji yipped. Soshaku gave me a half smile. I rolled my eyes at him. We all jumped onto the boat. Soshaku and I landed on our feet and Tooboe landed on Akuji. I laughed and so did Soshaku. “Idiots” Soshaku laughed.
“Shut up Soshaku!” Tooboe hissed
“Get off me!” Akuji said
Tooboe jumped off him.
“Don’t laugh! That was your fault Soshaku!” Tooboe growled.
“So? It was still funny!” Soshaku snapped
I rolled my eyes at them “Shut up you two!” I hissed
I got up and looked around. We were on a large ship, It had old creaking wood floors and was traveling very slowly. “Were are we the Titanic?!” Soshaku groaned.
I wasn’t paying attention; I was looking over the edge of the boat. The water looked like it was getting ripped in half as we sailed through it. I imagined my mum’s face. She had died from a boat collision and ever since then I never liked boats.
“You ok?” Tooboe asked me.
I smiled “Fine” then the boat came to a sudden stop. I almost fell of the ledge but Soshaku grabbed my collar. I choked “careful!” I hissed.
He shrugged “What was that!?” Tooboe asked.
“All hands on deck!” we heard the captain yell. We all looked in front of the boat and a larger boat smashed into it. Then gunpowder hit my nose “Guys hunters!” I yelled Soshaku jumped in front of me as a bullet rang out and hit his shoulder. He grunted, then morphed as people started to jump off the boat and swam around us. I morphed as well then I felt something bit me. I yipped seeing a raptor “I liked it when you were dead!” I growled. We were surrounded. I felt a bullet pierce my chest I flopped to the ground, unable to move. Who are these people I thought. My vision blurred the last thing I saw was Akuji getting shot in the leg. No! I though, not my pack….

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Needs some touching-up.

Anonymous said...

Good job, but why'd the lady have to die?
And on a personal note, what have you got against raptors anyways? Hee hee hee.

The HUB said...

keep up the writing!

Anonymous said...

You have to express more your opinion to attract more readers, because just a video or plain text without any personal approach is not that valuable. But it is just form my point of view

Anonymous said...

It is useful to try everything in practise anyway and I like that here it's always possible to find something new. :)

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